Topic: How to write a short story for kids
June 20, 2019 / By Talisha Question:
for a school report, i have 2 write a short story that would interest kindergardeners and 1st graders. is this good??
A Christmas Story
Once a pon a time, there lived a princess named Rose. She had everything she ever wanted. she never took no for an answer. she was truly a spoiled brat.
One day, she insisted that she had a pony. her father said, : sweetheart, i don't have enough $ 2 get u a pony. i promise i will get you one next yr." princess rose threw a fit. she cried and wined. she simply had 2 have things her way. "but father, all of my friends have a pony! i'm the only one with out a pony! FATHER!!!" Rose yelled. her father shook his head and left her royal bedroom.
Later that day, princess rose remained in her room, still crying about not having a pony. "how mean he was! how dare he say no to ME! i'm the princess and i should get what i want!" her father felt terrible about not giving her what she wanted. but he couldn't. he was short on $.
A couple of days b4 Christmas, her father was still concerned about princess rose. she hasn't spoken 2 him in 2 whole weeks. he sure hoped that princess rose would get into the Christmas spirt.
Still in her room, Rose called servant Bob up 2 c if her father got her the pony. " i'm afriad he didn't, master rose." bob said. "ugh!! when is that man gonna gimme the stupid pony??"!!" she yelled. " get out of her! go fetch me my latte!" the servant made a swift move and went 2 get the royal pain her latte.
"but master richie, you're daughter wants her pony! & she wants it NOW!!" servant bob said. " i don't care, bob!" Master richie ( a.k.a. princess roses' father) said.
On christmas eve, master richie wrote a note 2 sant saying, " Dear saint nick, my daughter rose would like a pony. she wants it so badly that she hasn't talked 2 me in weeks! if you are 2 come by, please drop off a pony in our farmland. yours truly, king richie."
on christmas day rose rushed down her 50 flights of stairs & nearly crashed into her 14 ft. christmas tree. around the tree was 100s of gifts. no of those really mattered 2 her, she just wanted her pony! she peeked out into her farmland and guess what she found? coal!! she learned 2 respect her elders and a yr. l8ter, her dream came true... she got a pony!!
PLZ GRADE IT: A, B, C, D, or F!! thx! :)
Regena | 1 day ago
Its a good KID story. I would give it an A
ps. I understand that you had to type this fast and didnt use full words