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Is this supposed to be good or bad i remember back to it and cry.its been a while.?

Is this supposed to be good or bad i remember back to it and cry.its been a while.? Topic: How to write a good diary entry
June 21, 2019 / By Desmond
Question: a chapter in my life.... IT'S 7TH GRADE... I stared at the girl next to me...She was my so called "best friend"... I stared at her... Long, silky hair... And I wished she was mine... But she didn't notice me like that... I knew it... After class she walked up to me and asked me for the notes she had missed the day before... And I handed them to her... She said "thanks"... And gave me a kiss on the cheek... I wanted to tell her... I want her to know that I don't want to be "just friends"... I love her but I'm too shy to tell her... And I don't know why... carried on additional details.... IT'S SENIOR YEAR... The day before prom... She walked to my locker... "My date is sick" she said... He's not going to go... Well... I didn't have a date and in 7th grade... We made a promise that if neiter of us had dates... We'd go together just as "best friends"... And so we did... IT'S PROM NIGHT... After everything was over with... I was standing at her front door step... I stared at her ... She smiled at me... I wanted her to be mine... But she doesn't think of me like that... And I know it... Then she said "I had the best time... Thanks!"... And she gave me a kiss on the cheek... I wanted to telll her... I wanted her to know that I don't want to be "just friends"... I love her but I'm just too shy... And I don't know why... IT'S GRADUATION DAY... A day passed... And then a week... And then a month... Before I could blink... It was graduation day... I watched her... Perfect body... Floated like an angel up on stage to get her diploma... I wanted her to be mine... But she doesn't think of me that way... And I know it... Before everyone went home... She came to me in her smock and hat... And cried as I hugged her... Then she lifted her head from my shoulders and said "you're my best friend"... "Thanks!"... And gave me a kiss on the cheek... I wanted to tell her.. I wanted to know that I wanted to be more than "just friends"... I love her but I'm too shy... And I don't know why... IT'S A FEW YEARS LATER... Now I sit in the pews of the church... A church that she is getting married in now... I watched her say "I do" an drive off to her new life... Married to another man... I wanted her to be mine... But she didn't see me like that... And I knew it... But before she drove away... She came to me and said "You came!... Thanks!"... And she kissed me on the cheek... I wanted to tell her... I wantd her to know that I didn't want to be "just friends"... I love her but I'm just too shy... And I don't know why... YEARS PASSED... I looked down at the coffin of a girl who used to be my "best friend"... At the service they read a diary entry she had wrote in her high school years... This is what it said... "I stare at him... Wishing he was mine... But he doesn't notice me like that... And I know it... I wanted to tell him... I wanted him to know... That I don't want to be "just friends"... I love him but I'm just too shy... And I don't know why... I wish he would tell me he loved me"... I wish I did too... I thought to myself and I cried... i kno i got it in a text to but strangley its exactly wot happened to me... tht why my friend sent it to me she got it and was shocked how its so accurate....:O i was shocked as well....
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Benton Benton | 7 days ago
this wasn't you..i just got a text with this same message....quit lyin! but it is a sweet story!
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Benton Originally Answered: Is this supposed to be good or bad i remember back to it and cry.its been a while.?
this wasn't you..i just got a text with this same message....quit lyin! but it is a sweet story!

Benton Originally Answered: I just got back into writing. I think I've lost my passion-how do I gain it back?
I'm impressed. You have kept on writing, with some gaps, and you piece got mixed reviews. MIXED. Note that not all were negative. Plus, your school believed in your ability, else it wouldn't have ask you to write for its magazine. (You do not say if it was the school in your old or your new country.) You are four years older, and have gone through rough times and depression. You cannot become again the person you were. Look ahead and go ahead. It may be miles away, but all tunnels end and there is light at the end of your tunnel. Capture what you have learned in those four years, and what you learn now, and what you aspire to learn in what you write now. I know it is frustrating. I am frustrated too. I have found writing hard as I've grown older. But keep hope. Keep determined. Keep writing. Even if you think it's not easy or at your former level, do your best.
Benton Originally Answered: I just got back into writing. I think I've lost my passion-how do I gain it back?
First off, it's important that you're treating your depression. If you're not effectively treating your depression, then gaining your passion for writing isn't going to help because it will only be temporary.

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