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Correct and modify the paragraph?if any thing is wrong? Topic: It management resume cover letter
April 22, 2019 / By Abbigael
Question: Correct and modify the below paragraph? Will someone be good enough to provide a good position for a person with excellent communicative, Leadership and Managing ability. Professionally qualified person, holder of Bachelor of Computer Science from Bangalore University(India), around 5 years of U.A.E(Dubai) experience in Company Incorporation and Administration and 10 month of Kuwait experience in Administration .I would love to be a Administrative/secretarial/Management position. I could assure you, I will exceed your Expectations through my dedication and commitment to the job.
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Stafford Stafford | 1 day ago
I recommend hiring a résumé writer, unless you're expecting them to hire you with just a cursory understanding of English. (It's possible, given your credentials.) A résumé writer will help you with the résumé and each cover letter.
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Stafford Originally Answered: Are the 3 sentences below that I have written correct? Please correct them if they're wrong?
1. He dropped out of university. or He was expelled from the university. 2. Tom stopped breathing. Therefore, John started doing chest compressions for him and when Tom came back to life, John was proud of himself. ^Not too sure about that one, don't trust me on it, haha. 3) He wrote this story as part of his college application.
Stafford Originally Answered: Are the 3 sentences below that I have written correct? Please correct them if they're wrong?
1) He dropped out of the university or He was kicked out of the university (depending on what you're trying to say) 2) When Tom stopped breathing, John started doing chest compressions for him. John was very proud of himself when Tom came back to life. 3) He wrote this story as a part of his college application. Hope this helps :)
Stafford Originally Answered: Are the 3 sentences below that I have written correct? Please correct them if they're wrong?
1) He was kicked out of the University. 2) Tom stopped breathing. Therefore, John started doing chest compressions for him. When Tom started breathing again John was proud of himself. 3) He wrote this story as part of his application for college. I don't know I could be wrong too lol :D

Otis Otis
Do you want this to be a cover letter for your resume, or do you want this to be the opening part of your resume itself? That makes a difference as to how it is revised. But here are some corrections: * excellent communication, leadership and management skills * approximately six years' experience in administration and (incorporation???) in the Middle East * administrative/secretarial or management position (no capital letters) * expectations (no capital letter)
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Otis Originally Answered: Who can correct this paragraph please?
I actually cut and pasted your paragraph into a word document and did a spell and grammar check. It came back twice as not needing any changes. Now, I have my own opinions of grammar and I would agree that the paragraph is in pretty good shape, but I would not recommend using a number (1st) to start a paragraph, and would change that to "First". There are probably too many ands in your first sentence, but again, it is grammatically correct. The other fallacy I see is that the paragraph should have 3 - 4 sentences, where you actually have one, which makes it a sentence rather than a paragraph. That I can't fix unless you have more details of what you want your readers to know. Finally, you didn't end with any punctuation.
Otis Originally Answered: Who can correct this paragraph please?
First year students at college of ......... suffer from the defect of mastering productive skills, interacting literally and orally through speaking, and writing skills for the lack of incapability of acquiring the listening skill the reasons. Defects of such are implied in weakness of learning and the strategies of dealing with literacy skills situations in addition to the inappropriate exponent displayed by the textbook, "Tapestry" <-- underline

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