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I need to write a strong thesis for a paper?

I need to write a strong thesis for a paper? Topic: How to write a thesis sentence
April 22, 2019 / By Blessing
Question: So we have a research paper due in January and I am trying to come up with a very strong thesis statement. My paper is about the invention of the internal combustion engine. At first I started with this: The invention of the internal combustion engine led to new forms of transportation that were much easier and cheaper. After revision, I now have: The invention of the internal combustion engine pioneered new forms of transportation that opened a whole new world of possibilities. Does anyone have any ideas on how to make the thesis any better? Or even a complete revision? Any help would be greatly appreciated!
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Airlea Airlea | 5 days ago
The invention of the internal combustion engine has pioneered new forms of transportation that have changed the world forever and now, because of it's wide use, is not only incredible but, also more affordable today. By the way, your thesis statement is not necessarily a thesis sentence. It can be more than one. hope I helped, Thanks!
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Airlea Originally Answered: Help me write a strong thesis statement for my argumentative essay against abortion?
Hello... Abortion Should Not Be Legalized Abortion is the worst thing a woman can do against human dignity. It is a crime against life. No woman has the right to kill a new living being. Many countries ban abortion and many institutions fight against it. Abortion is immoral and it should not be legalized. Abortion is also a threat to the mother's health. A woman can suffer an infection or internal bleeding. She could also become sterilized, the permanent inhability to bear a child. Abortion not only kills the baby but may kill the mother too. During an abortion, despite the use of local anesthesia, 97% of the women report severe pain, and if a more powerful drug is used she could suffer dangerous side effects. Many complications are common after an abortion, like inflammation of the reproductive organs... You can get more info here:
Airlea Originally Answered: Help me write a strong thesis statement for my argumentative essay against abortion?
You need to establish WHY you think it is murder. You're pulling out all the "big, fighting' words" too soon and you sound like the same broken recorder we hear on the news. Instead, try something like this (check the facts and stats first): "The question of when a fertilized human egg becomes a life is at the heart of the abortion question. The time from one second after the sperm meets the egg to birth has many stages of developments. US courts say third trimester abortions are illegal. Why? Is abortion murder at that point? Some people believe once the heart beats or brain activity is present the fetus becomes a life. Others say it is after six months or when the fetus could live outside the mother. I believe, life begins at conception and that abortion at any time is murder. You could include these points: the law is confused. A criminal who murders a pregnant woman (at any stage) often gets a greater punishment. Why? If the fetus isn't a life then why should a person be punished extra for killing it? Society is confused: Everyone mourns a miscarriage and talks of its tragedy. Why? Isn't the fetus just a parasite? Suppose a woman dies in a car crash. Everyone is sad. Then suppose they announce that the woman was pregnant. The sadness and gasps of shock are that much worse. Why? What does it matter if the unborn die?
Airlea Originally Answered: Help me write a strong thesis statement for my argumentative essay against abortion?
A thesis statement is a sentence that includes your main opinion and your reasons why you believe in this reason. Remember that these reasons will make up the body of your paragraph. So if my essay was about myself believing that Justin Beiber was secretly a girl, and my essay body would be about his dress, his hair, and his voice, my thesis statement could be: I believer Justin Beiber is secretly a girl, based on that his clothes reflect what a girl could wear, his haircut is sported my many girls, and his voice is remarkebly similiar to a girl's voice. A thesis statement doesn't have to be fancy. It just tell the reader what the essay will be about. But make sure the rest of you introductory paragraph is good! I think that your thesis statement is great! But to make it stronger I would take out "and that the unborn doesn't share the same rights as humans" the "people" and the "the", change "is" to "are", and add "infants" after "unborn. So your thesis would look like this: "Even though some believe that unborn infants are not yet a human being, I believe that abortion is morally wrong because it is murder, killing is always gravely wrong, and everyone has equal rights to life." Hope I helped, good luck with your essay!

Trace Trace
my history teacher said to write 1) an introductory sentence and you just restate the question or topic with different words for that example "bananas and apples have similarities and differences in their structure." 2) the although statement this guides what u will say like "although bananas and apples are similar they have more differences." 3) the explanatory statement this explains your although statement, an example of this is "bananas are curved shape while apples are round." hope this helps, sorry im not writing it for u but this can help u and anyone else who reads this write thesises in the future.
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Trace Originally Answered: Im doing a term paper on Benito Mussolini and i don't know a good thesis statement to write?
Benito Mussolini, the leader --Duce-- of the Partido Nazionale Facista, had formed the first Fascist government in Europe on 30 October 1922. On 30 May 1924 Matteoti, the secretary-general of the opposition Socialist Party (of which Mussolini had once himself been an ardent young leader), rose to address the Chamber of Deputies in Rome and to condemn the new regime for its violence, in what all agreed was a brilliant speech. The Duce made threatening noises. On 10 June Matteoti left the Chamber and was not seen again. Speculation as to his whereabouts was enormous and the threatening scandal immense. It was not the ideal moment for an official visit, particulary of an exotic nature (the visit of Haile Selassie, his nobles, and six lions from Ethiopia). A cartoon appeared in the Italian press showing Ras Tafari (Selassie) whispering to the Italian Chief of Police: "Tell me, in all confidence, did you eat him?" I can see at least three thesis statements in this footnote from the book 'Haile Selassie's War." First, Mussolini's Fascist government was the first Fascist government in Europe. 2. Mussolini himself was once an ardent member of the Socialist Party. 3. Not quite 11 years after the visit of Haile Selassie and his lions to Rome, Italian troops invaded Ethiopia. Giacomo Matteoti (1885-1924) R. I. P. Apparently, firenze thinks a dictator who has his political opponents murdered is "a great man." I will let History be the judge.
Trace Originally Answered: Im doing a term paper on Benito Mussolini and i don't know a good thesis statement to write?
Read up on Mussolini, there is masses of stuff to make a thesis from. One idea: was he good for Italy as a leader?

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