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What do you think of this song I wrote for my sister?

What do you think of this song I wrote for my sister? Topic: How to write a song for your sister
July 19, 2019 / By Carol
Question: Okay so my sister was diagnosed with type 1 diabetes when she was 4, and this song is how we were there for eachother during both that time, and when my dad was sent to war when we were young. Opinions on how it could be improved? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AJ1IvuWoq7k That actually makes perfect sense!! Thanks so much =) I think I'm gonna fix that part!
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Angela Angela | 8 days ago
That's a winner - so nice of you to share it with us! I'm sure Andrea is thankful for your support and love. I am not a musical artist so its not my place to tell how to change it... I also like the video you have paired with it... One thing you may try is not jump so high on "soon" each time... start normal and raise it each time higher and higher to give illusion of flying higher and higher (does that make sense?) that's my two cents worth Again, i loved it as is and tried to rate it on you tube with thumbs up but you have that turned off... Thanks!
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Angela Originally Answered: What do you think of this song I wrote?
Yo! So as a songwriter myself I have a few tips/bits of constructive criticism for you. It's a personal song, you can tell... it's good.. especially for your age! BUT, if you're wanting to touch other people with your music then you need to make it relatable for others as well... they need to be able to connect to the message you're trying to convey. If you're just doing it for yourself like your diary then that's awesome and who cares if its confusing to others as long as you know what you're talking about.. BUT, if you're wanting to get people to like your music and you want to head down a career path with this then let me tell you: I've worked in country music and it definitely matters if your song is relatable or not. It also matters how this sounds with your melody.... it it's a great song with great lyrics and a crappy melody then you've just lost your song. Another tip that always was useful for me: Don't FORCE the melody...it'll come naturally, focus more on telling your story and the melody will come. Work with other songwriters and master your craft. Songwriting gets better the more you do it, in my opinion. Good luck! And keep it up :) -MB
Angela Originally Answered: What do you think of this song I wrote?
If I heard what it gave the impression of then probably I would reply this higher, nevertheless it appears lovely well, and I consider I could pay attention to it on instances... It turns out a bit of quick and could handiest be like a a million:30 and such a lot songs are approximately two:00-four:00 mins lengthy... nevertheless it appears find it irresistible could be a well music... Hope I helped...
Angela Originally Answered: What do you think of this song I wrote?
that's amazing im starting a band and i need songs like that can you sing and if yes re you interested in a punk rock/metal band audition? ps bands called E.Y.E.S its ok its not your style but these songs are the best this question you will still say no to but is there any chance you could write the bands songs its a lot of pressure but i can see these songs on radios and phones everywhere

Angela Originally Answered: Do you like my song I wrote?
That's actually really good. I'm not exaggerating when I say that it almost sounds like it was written by a professional. It's just the way you present it like the beginning part and how you build up the story. You should write music for it too.
Angela Originally Answered: Do you like my song I wrote?
If I heard what it seemed like then perhaps I might reply this greater, however it appears lovely well, and I consider I could concentrate to it on instances... It turns out slightly quick and could simplest be like a one million:30 and such a lot songs are approximately two:00-four:00 mins lengthy... however it appears adore it could be a well track... Hope I helped...

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