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English speakers-I have a problem [10 points]?

English speakers-I have a problem [10 points]? Topic: Developing a research questions
June 20, 2019 / By Aden
Question: I just want someone to edit my writing. Thank you for your help :D ----- Global Rights Organization has set a goal to give LGBT their rights and protection. Global Rights said “Global Rights joins an international coalition of NGOs working in concert to expand the reach and effectiveness of existing human rights protections for LGBTI individuals”. Organization like these does not support human rights, but they are encouraging human corruption and killing. A research conducted by John Diggs, a Practicing Internist at Wing Medical Center on "The Health Risks of Gay Sex" said that the medical consequences of gays having different sexual partners are likely to develop HIV/AIDS, Syphilis and other Sexually Transmitted Diseases (STD). There are various research done on the consequences of the same sex marriage and its effect on people. The question is, why do countries support human corruption in the name of liberalism? Why do they not treat these people rather than encouraging them to indulge in sinful acts and sell their souls? @Koko: I am totally against same-sex marriage and similar stuffs. My research already says that it has many negative results. A man and a woman show completion.These LGBT people need to be treated in the hospital. Thanks for your answer
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Steffie Steffie | 1 day ago
Global Rights Organization has set a goal to give LGBT their rights and protection. Global Rights said “Global Rights joined* an international coalition of NGOs working in concert to expand the reach and effectiveness of existing human rights protections for LGBT individuals”. Organization like these do* not support human rights, but* rather* encouraging human corruption and killing. A research conducted by John Diggs, a Practicing Internist at Wing Medical Center on "The Health Risks of Gay Sex" said that the medical consequences of gays having different sexual partners are likely to develop HIV/AIDS, Syphilis and other Sexually Transmitted Diseases (STD). There are various researches* done on the consequences of* same sex marriage and its effect on people. The question is, why do countries support human corruption in the name of liberalism? Why do they not treat these people rather than encouraging them to indulge in sinful acts and sell their souls? * marked are ones I corrected = Why do they not treat these people... ? Why do they not treat these people equally? Is that what you're trying to say? :o
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Steffie Originally Answered: I'd appreciate feedback from native speakers of English and learners of English who have native level proficiency.?
I would not use MUST because you contradict that direct command by going to the movies instead. HAVE TO shows an obligation (but then you indicate you will avoid fulfilling the obligation by going to the movies). So in reality, you are implying " I SHOULD write up .... " even though you do not use those words.

Quanna Quanna
Global Rights Organization has set a goal to give LGBT their rights and protection. Global Rights said “Global Rights joins an international coalition of NGOs working in concert to expand the reach and effectiveness of existing human rights protections for LGBTI individuals”. Organizations like these do not support human rights, but they are encouraging human corruption and killing. A research conducted by John Diggs, a Practicing Internist at Wing Medical Center on "The Health Risks of Gay Sex" said that the medical consequences of gays having different sexual partners are likely to develop HIV/AIDS, Syphilis and other Sexually Transmitted Diseases (STD). There is much research/ there are various research papers done on the consequences of the same-sex marriage and its effect on people. The question is: why do countries support human corruption in the name of liberalism? Why do they not treat these people rather than encouraging them to indulge in sinful acts and sell their souls?
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Meade Meade
Paragraph 1 Line 4 needs a change. Section needs to be changed to 'Organisations like these DO not' Paragraph 2 line 4. 'There IS various research done' Other than that I don't see any other problems :)
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Lauryn Lauryn
Liberalism contained in the u . s . a . as we communicate stands for hating usa, loving government, seeking to all people as genuinely evil and wanting regulation from government, hating faith and loving immorality.
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Lauryn Originally Answered: Native English speakers, please help?
American English: "You always wait until the last moment to get the job done. You will regret that someday." "You never start your work until the last minute. You'll be sorry one day." "Stop putting off your work till the last minute, or you'll be sorry." The last sentence sounds best, however it is the most aggressive.

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